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Replies: 1Last Post Aug. 20 11:49am by LittleItaly
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thanks to chaosdisown.
most of the ideas here are theres, i just re-aranged the words a bit.

When i called you that night,
i said far too much.
and the moment you left,
was the beginging of the end.
My time still wouldnt shorten for you,
and it will never again.
You were as cold as steel,
but i've seen you change like the seasons.


idk if im done or what?


3:26 pm on Aug. 19, 2008
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could use work

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They say no one is perfect.
They say practice makes perfect. I wish they would make up their minds.

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